Shannon:
I think that
the first topic that you approached was by far the best one that you had. The
way you were able to quickly relate the journey idea to that of John and Sylvia
and the idea of technology will open up plenty of doors to talk about a lot of
material from the novel. The analogies idea you have doesn’t seem to be
supported well enough; that is why I think it the weakest of your four themes.
I also think that the second and third themes that you approached are very
similar in nature and would end up overlapping with each other. I personally
think that the journey and destination idea is the one you should pursue.
Priya:
I believe the
topic of technology is the best of the four that you have presented as it will
allow the largest scope of any of the other topics. I feel like the ‘Chris is a
foil topic’ would serve as a support for something of large scope. While your
third topic does tend to approach the same ideas as Shannon’s first topic I believe
that the development you currently have is far to cliché for the term paper.
Your fourth topic is intriguing in where the paper may go because I am not very
sure based on what you have where it could go. I honestly don’t think any of
the topics that you are weak, rather I see that some may make better supports
for others. But after thinking everything through I feel like your best topic
may be the one that discusses technology.
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