Sub-topic: How technology demonstrates its positives and
negatives in modern society
Technology’s presence in the
novel is viewed as both positive and negative, based on the individual’s
perception. Similarly, technology has both good and bad attributes in modern
society as well. While many individuals tend to get caught up with all of the
progress and advancements that technology has led to, they sometimes forget
that technology is not all good.
Technology has many significant
uses that facilitate everyday life. Accessibility to information and
communication is one central purpose that technology serves in modern-day life.
Today, the invention of cell phones and social media is more prominent than
ever before, which allows for the easy spread of information and communication.
One important characteristic of such advancements is the ability to communicate
with family and friends that live far away. New technological advancements are
occurring every day, such as Skype and FaceTime, of which minimize the feeling
of distance and contribute to the addition of more modes of communication. In
addition, technological advancements have aided tremendously in the area of
medicine and science. New medications, surgeries, and discoveries have been
made, all with the assistance of modern technology. In connection to the novel,
the idea of convenience also comes into play. The narrator is able to fix his
own motorcycle problems because of the fact that he has familiarized himself
with technology, and can use it to his benefit.
Despite all of the positive
influences technology has, there are definitely negative effects, one of the
most important being society’s reliance on it. Humans, especially in today’s
technologically-based society, have become so accustomed to having technology
at their fingertips that they have become dependent upon it. Some have even
become addicted to it, as they cannot function properly without it. In
addition, the prominence of technology in modern society has led society to become
isolated from one another and develop a lack of social skills. While the idea
of convenience is significant in regard to communication, people, mainly
younger generations that have grown up with advanced technology, do become
infatuated with it, constantly checking their phones or laptops. On a larger
scale, technology has led to a huge increase in pollution. Large companies and factories
that depend on technology to succeed are contributing greatly to the overall amount
of pollution in all areas, including noise pollution, air pollution, water
pollution, and light pollution. The presence of technology in society is
constantly increasing, which speaks volumes for the influences that it will
have in the near future, which are not all positive.
Technology’s role in modern-day society is vital, yet there are certain
aspects that lead some to question its importance. While technology most
definitely has its own positive attributes, there are many flaws in its
omnipresence throughout society. Factors such as accessibility to information,
communication, travel, and convenience are all benefits of technology, yet one
must consider the resulting flaws, such as pollution, isolation, and dependence.
As in the case of the narrator, John, and Sylvia, it is up to the individual to
determine whether he or she would rather embrace technology or dismiss it.
I think the second part of your paper is very well rounded. There are a few grammar mistakes but nothing that is truly offensive. I like how you went about and created this comparison between the positives and the negatives, creating this duality that is very prevalent in my paper. The only real criticism I have is there is not enough context to the book in this passage. It is possible that is because of the nature of your paper and the way it is split up, I just find that all of this talk about technology only gets a sense of context in the final paragraph. But overall I think it was really good and is good body for the paper.
ReplyDeleteI love this sub-topic and agree that there are both negative and positive aspects to technology. I really like how you gave examples, such as Skype and Facebook. Although you explained very well and with great detail, I think that you should somehow link it back to the differences between John and Sylvia and the narrator. You should maybe write what they believe the pros and cons are. This could coincide with your ideas and add others. Embracing and dismissing technology was just a very small part about the actual book. Other than that, I think it is a really good idea.
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